Where did it all go wrong?

by Clare   Jul 12, 2006


We used to be best mates,
what did i do wrong?
We used to share
our secrets and dreams,
fantasizing until the dawn,
but as we were walking to the bus stop, you crossed the road without looking
but none of us saw the van
coming at a speed
careening to wards you.
In slow motion the van connected,
you flew through the air
and we screamed as you hit the hard ground,
the ambulance came and you were rushed to hospital,
When you finally came out,
you were different,
you didn't talk to me like we were best friends,
you talked as if i was someone you knew but didn't like,
when did everything go horribly wrong?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jib

    Oopz soz babe i had sum misspelt words in ma last comment lol

    Luv ya lotz x-----xoxoxo------x

  • 18 years ago

    by Jib

    Hey clare i know u must feel pretty upset bout the person your talking bout i dont knpow if a should say her name lol wait i just said she was a her woopz o well so we know its a girl but they dont know her nameee lol soz yea this is a guy comment soz but your poem was awsome

    luv ya lotz x----xoxoxo-------x

  • 18 years ago

    by Clare

    Hey guyz, although i am the author of this poem, i woznt actualli there wen my friend got hit by the van, bt from my other friends accounts i can picture it perfectly, though id rather not.
    clare
    __xx

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