Awww absolutely beautiful...i had like watery eyes! which is really hard for me...well done your a great writer! keep it up! and im so so sorry about ur loss..he would be very proud of you and your poems! xoxox

I love this poem.... I lost the love of my life, its been 10 months. I can relate, and I know what the future holds.. I imagine its this same way you write. My friend lost her BF 5 years ago, and she is still lost. Still sad, still carries him with her. Thanks for the read. It was awesome!

That is a brilliant, beautiful yet extremely sad and heart-wrenching poem. it really touched me and brought tears to my eyes. well done, you have a very stunning gift.

Wow this is a great poem!
it seems like you wrote it with passion and love it blew me away! Im sorry for your loss
BTW thax for commenting on my poem, Cure for a broken heart, i hope you had great friends to go though that with you

Wow this is powerfull
im so sorri thanx for commenting on mine
your sucha great writer and it flowed so nicely!!
stay strong gorgus!!
x x xmoniquex x x

That was really deep and very well written

thank u for the comment

Hey thanks for the comment! But i can totally relate to this poem. I lost my mom seven years ago. This poem is perfect it wraps up a lot of what i fell adn obviously what you fell too! Keep writing, you rock!

This is really good

Amazing poem. I've never read anything like it. I enjoyed every bit of it and it all made sense. You are an amazing poet so kee pup the good work. Rosie xXx

Beautiful poem. that really touched me. yer a great writter

That was really great, it reminded me of my father, he died from smoking when I was 19, I took care of him until his last day. I almost cried when I read your poem. And thank you for what you said about mine too, it made me really happy.

Lol i know i have already made a comment....but i love reading this over and over again. its really touching and i love it