Great poem, much better than mine i love u'r poems i've been writeing poems ever since a year ago but just started writeing them on here. there mostly about how i feel expect the ones like me sliceing my wrist well hope to be reading more of your poems Darien. i give you a 20/20!!!!!!

sign, Rosie

My fav. lines were

"Caught in a vicious circle of life and death,
It all ending tragically with one last breath."

and this is a very good poem very dark...the way i like them 5/5

Enchanting.

Magnificent.

Exquisite.

You're really talented, good job.

Love,
Tina
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I like it..you should be a songwriter!!..hehe...for a death metal or emo band...hehe...

Thats really good. I cant write anything that good

Darien.. I think that the way you have captured the essense of a graveyard is remarkably accurate this is a great peice of writing keep up the great work.
~Kyra~

I love this, great! I could imagine myself in te graveyard when i read it...

Wow. That really was amazing. Wonderful descriptions && use of imagery. It held me captivated until the very end.
xxx Ami

Creepy & Mysterious! I Liked The Message In This Poem, As Well As The Words You Used Descriptivley To Describe The Graveyard "Here in the graveyard bodies lay to rest,
Richer than gold mines and oil derricks.
Dreams and ideas buried six feet under,
What could have been we now wonder?"

You Had Your Way With This Poem, Feels Like You've Made Love To This Poem Because Theres Pure Pleasure In Everyline,

"Forgotten dead these fences shall guard.
Buried for eternity here in the graveyard."
(1 Things For Sure, Being a Write With Such Talent As You Have, Being Forgotten Will Never Become An Issue)
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo 5/5
Ps: Maybe I Should've Done Like Other People "Good Job!" lmao!!

Beautiful Write. Great flow in each stanza. Terrific rhymes. My favorite was:
"Homicidal and suicidal we will blame,
The act of taking a life is all the same."

There's truth in that line

Awesome!! this is one of my favorite poems!! The words you used are impressive and it is well written!! i am going to read it over again..5/5

I really liked it it made me feel like i was there and its really gothic and i just loved it.

Very good

Savage, check out my writings..

WOW!!! Holy hell i am completely speechless, that is very dark,powerful,and great! It had a lot of meaning to it, it went beyond the stereotype of graveyard's and you really opended up and made it your own! i loved it

This poem is the best i have ever read i felt i was in a graveyard amounst the dead it was so detailed and good well done alex x x x

I really enjoyed your poem. Sometimes I am in the mood for dark when it is well written. And this is very well written. t/y for the comment on my poem. I really don't have a style other then there is no particular style.

"Caught in a vicious circle of life and death,
It all ending tragically with one last breath."

I loved these lines, i also thought it was interesting the way you rhymed only on the last two lines!! The title was Catchy like Krissey said earlier!! Nice Write! 5/5!! Keep it up!!

Darien I didn't explain that i'd been in care since i was 6. sorry about that, should have made it clearer :D

That was a great poem.. i loved it...