by Tainted Beauty Jul 12, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The darkness creeps around me, |
by Jamica
I like the ending. Good one! |
Wow.. another amazing one... the only thing i would change is the last line in the third stanza.. its just too long and doesnt flow with the poem |
by Driver
Great poem. different than the last one i read, but thats what makes things interesting, changing it up. well written. good job. |
Hauntingly beautiful poem. |
by Sole
Wow. I have had some rough nigtmares in the past few years, and I vividly remember watching the time slowly tick away until the night wasover and I could get up. This poem really brought my memories back, and though it hut a little, I'm surprised, and impressed of course, at the technique you used and how it really did seem to make the dreams come alive. |