Thats kinda sad. Reminds me of a nightmare I just had. Yeah. It was scary lol.

I thought it was pretty short and you could have added a little more detail to it, but I'm guessing you're gonna make a part two to it? anyways, at the start, in the second and third line, you said "And" at the beginning of both of them. Maybe you could think of something else to replace one of those cause to me it kinda threw it off. It was a great poem though. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wicked! I was curious to what [p-1] meant.

Another question, you really love the stars. You write about it so often. I think you can write a really good 'nature' poem just about the stars. It would be a joy to read.