by Natalie Jul 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I'll hold my breath as you walk right beside me, |
Good work |
by Paggles
Very Interesting...I googled Terza Rima Sonnet, and one of the very first hits was this poem. It may be coincidence, but I belive your poem to be a prime example of the form! Nice job on a first try. |
Another great write Nat! The one thing i love about reading your poetry is that you try all different types of styles, it makes it more interesting to read!!! I loved the last two lines it ends with such emotion!! |
Very good for a first attempt. I think the problem with this type of poem is the strict rhyme scheme and flow but you carried it of well None of the rhymes seemed at all forced and flowed really well. |
Not bad at all congrats on an awesome 5/5 job |