Another great write Nat! The one thing i love about reading your poetry is that you try all different types of styles, it makes it more interesting to read!!! I loved the last two lines it ends with such emotion!!
"Do you see me standing here or are you blind?
Needing you is the only thing on my mind."

Great Job!!! 5/5

Very Interesting...I googled Terza Rima Sonnet, and one of the very first hits was this poem. It may be coincidence, but I belive your poem to be a prime example of the form! Nice job on a first try.

Paggz

Good work