by Stephanie Jul 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You said you loved me, |
Great poem! One thing i would change maybe would be perhaps spacing out the last part of your poem. You started out by making different paragraphs for each lines, and then at the end you bunch up alot of sentences...i still love it though. its a lovely poem! :) xoxox. any of my latest? |