by Mycquel Jul 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
I'm at this point again where my cheeks are wet |
Very good, such strong emotion, are these poems based on actual events? they seem to recur quite often in your work, this is diplayed well, and the point is clearly hammered home. |
by Jessica
This was pretty good.. it displayed your emotions well and we can all see the pain and fustration you are going through.. i like the metaphors you use, they really add effect to the poem.. |