This was pretty good.. it displayed your emotions well and we can all see the pain and fustration you are going through.. i like the metaphors you use, they really add effect to the poem..

I'm so sick of his lies and the games he play
^should be "plays" not "play"

Yet I feel so dumb when I fall for the sweet things he say
^should be "says" not "say"

nice job, keep up the good work! 4/5

Very good, such strong emotion, are these poems based on actual events? they seem to recur quite often in your work, this is diplayed well, and the point is clearly hammered home.