My love

by Nelle   Jul 12, 2006


I would give my whole world for you
But, why is it that, that doesn't even phase you
You let this girl come in your life, and now I'm through
Is it really her that is right for you?

We have been through a lot in the past six years
Have you forgotten all the tears?
Are you really letting me go just so she can be yours
Losing you is definitely my biggest fear

I love you with my heart and soul
I was always the best I could be to you
But, all you did was push my love to the floor
But, I see now in the past years you really knew

I would give my life, just for you to survive
You made me whole when i died inside
You protected me from other men, and kept me safe
You never had to put your love to the test

I want to be the reason why you are so happy
I want to make you see that, you are whom i adore
I guess until, you let go of this girl
Your love will never compare to mine, for I will always love you more.

I will wait for you until I can't wait any longer
You have my heart, so please keep it whole
Once you see, that I'm not letting go of you
Then maybe you will see, where you truly need to be.

( This is true..and I will always love you, baby..whether you care or not)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Veeerrryyy nice. i really really loved it. so beautiful, and soo emotional. it touched my heart. brilliant.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Great poem. The rhyming pattern was unclear, but it did not phase the poem, more added character to it. How do you do that?!? Some of the lines really stood out to me as relating to my own reality, excellent write.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I really did love this poem, it was very sweet and sad at the same time, it was lovely, keep writing
    xxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Krisanta

    Aww hun im sorry to hear that your love was in vain lets hope it changes and he sees what i see in you and come back to you. I love You and im always here for you dont forget. _krisanta_

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    There's lots of emotion in this poem and he deffinatly isn't worth all your tears if he's just going to break your heart like that. Exelent poem. Keep writing. =]

    Pip xxx

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