by BleedingAngel Jul 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Black hair, black mascara |
This is amazing, 5/5 |
by Driver
You put a lot of emotion into your poems, i like it. your poems that ive read so far are both strong and well composed, and you have a good choice of words. keep it up. |
Wow-that is an amazing poem! It is so powerful and flows so nicely--The rhyme works well in it-Great write!!! 5/5 |
Some nice words chosen to play to the advantage of this piece. Not really that strong on something...it was missing something. As far as I could tell there was only one spelling error. Overall it was a nice write. |
by Amanda
Hey sweetie! Don't you give up now cos you are my friend and I know we will always be there for each other. Sad poem, can understand how you feel. Amanda xxxx |