Great Poem. Thanks for the comment about my "Missing" one.
5/5

4ever --
I had to give this poem a 3/5. If you entered this in a contest, you REALLY should have read it more carefully. There are like, ten grammar mistakes in here, and this is a very short poem. Most of it doesn`t even make sense. The theme was very vague ;; I don`t understand the intent of paper wings. It seemed to have a somewhat steady flow, but there is room for improvement.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

The poem was short and got th message across but there are too man grammar and spelling errors to give this a five. I sort of get the whole paper wings thing but that wasn't clear enough to understand. :(

The poem was short and got th message across but there are too man grammar and spelling errors to give this a five. I sort of get the whole paper wings thing but that wasn't clear enough to understand. :(

Kewl.....did u win....