by Simon Hayes Jul 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
If only time would stand still, |
by Sourav
Sweet and romantic poem... It flows very well... Well done! |
by Catherine
Oh, how sweet! |
Awww Simon.... this is so sweet :) I'm loving every little word of it. Great job my friend, always take care... many hugs.... |
by Natalie
Aw, wow! For such a short poem I thought it was written really well. I liked how your flow and rhyming flowed so well together and didn't seem forced. It was a beautiful heartfelt piece. Keep it up! 5/5 |