Aw, wow! For such a short poem I thought it was written really well. I liked how your flow and rhyming flowed so well together and didn't seem forced. It was a beautiful heartfelt piece. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Awww Simon.... this is so sweet :) I'm loving every little word of it. Great job my friend, always take care... many hugs....

Oh, how sweet!

Sweet and romantic poem... It flows very well... Well done!