Serenity, that's what this piece invokes. Keep it up~Holly

Great Write!!! I like Haiku's but i cant write them!! 5/5!!! Good Job!!

I hav learned about these in school, this is a beautiful poem, seeya.

This poem is another great poem by you, keep up the great job

Different i loved this one really though it made me think of nice things for some reason these hiakus give you a step out of reality for a breath of fresh air lol very good (1) xxx alex xxx

Such a great job you did writing this haiku. i tried writing one and it didnt work out to well lol. but you did good! 5/5

~Kristina

I like the ending.. Very short. Even though a Haiku is common, still put what it is at the bottom *only a suggestion. I liked it, but the first two lines could be played with a little, in my eyes. Only a suggestion. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5