Loosing It

by Amber   Jul 12, 2006


Your work your hardest
to reach your goal
dig the deepest
to find your soul

The moment comes
you cant wait
then they choose someone else
that you just hate

You crash and fall
hitting the floor
the goal that you wanted
you cant adore

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  • 18 years ago

    by hayley

    Love it. great wording. i absolutly love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Loves Him

    I agree..it's really amazing for a short poem...and its really sad... great job though... i give it a 5..

    xoxo,
    Chelsea* ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Ren

    Awww! That's sad. I'm sorry if you didn't reach your goal. I know how that disappointment feels, but the best way to get through it is to stand right back up and try again! Take care, and I hope all works out for you! Much love!

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