Very interesting poem...

It's style is free, but words are in chains- I love it!

Very good poem i think ur a great poet

You write so beautifuly, i admire that you can put feeling into words the way you do, i never feel i can write down exactly how i feel but i get the feeling you are able to do that and i admire that

take care x0x0

EXCELLENT POEM! I remember very well the tweaked out writing spells. In fact I wrote the poem "The Dope Game" while I was high. 5/5