The Flame

by Tina Carr AKA Snickers   Jul 13, 2006


The flame in your eyes
Is growing
And growing
You hurt me
You don't care
That I'm sorry
How could you
Treat me this way
When you told me
You still loved me

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Sachi*~

    Brief, but gets the point across and hits home.
    wonderfully done!
    5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Short.........well...that was an interesting piece. Posed some really strangely provoking thoughts. Some of the words weren't really strong but really there was some good emotional usage.
    ~Faith-less

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow I love this it is so deep and I know how you feel here going throught it now she hurt be bad then tells me she still oves me what r we to do any how 5/5 keep it up

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