Wow I love this it is so deep and I know how you feel here going throught it now she hurt be bad then tells me she still oves me what r we to do any how 5/5 keep it up

Short.........well...that was an interesting piece. Posed some really strangely provoking thoughts. Some of the words weren't really strong but really there was some good emotional usage.
~Faith-less

Brief, but gets the point across and hits home.
wonderfully done!
5/5!