I'm Broken

by david   Jul 13, 2006


Faded tears running
Away from the sorrows
My blood is dripping
Killing me very slowly
I'm here because of you
You have my heart
And won't let it go
Without you i am broken

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  • 18 years ago

    by skittles

    Thats deep...feeling like youre dying like that. I know that feeling, and it sucks doesnt it? lol...its good though.

    love,
    skittles

  • 18 years ago

    by melissa

    Hey....i really like this poem! its nice

    and if you dont 'mind check out some of mine tell me what you think....please and thank you :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Another short one, this one's my favorite so far. I really like it. Keep up the great work. 5/5
    Tammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw.. that is really sweet and I can definitely relate to this. Great job! Keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by StephanieH

    I really like this poem, a lot it's great! keep it up check out my poems, thanx.!!

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