I really like this poem, a lot it's great! keep it up check out my poems, thanx.!!

Aw.. that is really sweet and I can definitely relate to this. Great job! Keep it up 5/5

Another short one, this one's my favorite so far. I really like it. Keep up the great work. 5/5
Tammie

Hey....i really like this poem! its nice

and if you dont 'mind check out some of mine tell me what you think....please and thank you :)

Thats deep...feeling like youre dying like that. I know that feeling, and it sucks doesnt it? lol...its good though.

love,
skittles