Fate

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Jul 13, 2006


I don't know how to explain
this feeling I have for you
Some would call it love
but I call it fate.
It started so well
and ended in tragedy
It's just another story of a girl
who fell a little to hard
for the wrong guy.
And got caught up
for something she thought was real
just like everyone else he let her down
and their love slowly faded away.
until he didn't know her anymore.

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  • 16 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Doing good

  • 19 years ago

    by aimee

    I really get it.
    great poem.

    xxxxxx.

  • 19 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very good poem. Like somebody else mentioned, this line:

    "It's just another story of a girl
    who fell a little to hard"

    It should be 'too' hard, not 'to'.

    Excellent work, though.

  • 19 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Great poem, you described it very well.

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...great poem...you put so emotion in it...thanks for commenting on my poem...you got my hidden message perfectly...it's exactly how i feel...anyways...excellent job on your poem...5/5.

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