This is an awesome poem!

Great job, really deep.

Love
Tina
< 33

5/5

Wow, really true! it was a great poem! 5/5
~*Katherine*~

I loved these lines:

and their love slowly faded away.
until he didn't know her anymore.

Your poem is really good, it's well written and very sad. It made me think about how things change in life, and how people change. Very sad =(

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Hey! Wow, this poem was lovely. It was different and interesting to read. I liked your style, tres unique. I loved the lines:

"It's just another story of a girl
who fell a little to hard
for the wrong guy."

Aint that the truth. *sigh* Your poem flowed really well and in all was a wonderful read. Keep up the awesome work. =)

5/5

P.S. Thanx so much for commenting on my poem it mean a lot! *hugs*

--Angie xoxo

Awwwww:( i can totally relate! i loved this one 2222!!!!!!!! one thing i noticed that's a little wrong
who fell a little to hard
to should be too...not that important just thought id tell u anyway gr8 work 5/5

Wow...great poem...you put so emotion in it...thanks for commenting on my poem...you got my hidden message perfectly...it's exactly how i feel...anyways...excellent job on your poem...5/5.

Great poem, you described it very well.

5/5

Very good poem. Like somebody else mentioned, this line:

"It's just another story of a girl
who fell a little to hard"

It should be 'too' hard, not 'to'.

Excellent work, though.

I really get it.
great poem.

xxxxxx.

Doing good