Where have you been all these days?Hopefully everything is goin on well with your life....and the poem is simply beautiful....the flow,the meaning,the sentiments attached to it,the rhyme scheme everything was just perfect...Hope you write more poems....take care and keep smiling always... |
by Gracie Jo
Very good poem. I really liked it. Keep it up and take care. :) |
by EpithetPoet
Really beautiful dear. i cant express how much i've mised reading your poetry. |
by Daniel J
Whilst I usually strive to avoid any poem with the word "kinfe" in it, and prepared to do so this time too. Imagine then my surprise and - frankly - joy, when this poem turned out to have not only a brilliant rhyming scheme but content too. I noted, and especially like, the way you end off on a positive note in this poem. |