Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
Also thanks for your comment on my poem If I, I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

Lol.. I found this a little tiny bit funny for some reason. I'm not sure if it was meant to.. but it did. Tehe.

For a poem you both did that quick, I thought it was pretty good. There was some great desriptions in it. And it had a little sweet touch to it.

I thought the way you guys ended it aswell was good. A really enjoyable read. Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

This is such a sweet poem. The rhyme is natural and flowing. You never forget where you came from. My favorite is the 2nd to last stanza. Great job.

That was sooo cute!! lol the next town over from me is a country/redneck type place..and this poem reminded me of it soo much!!! i loved it, it was great and it told a great story!! definitely 5/5

Very nice i liked it alot keep up the great work. 5/5
~Kyra~

I loved it! those words are nothing short from the truth, keep writing my friend, this poem was wicked!

Ha ha.
i like.. i like

Ha ha.
i like.. i like

Rad Poem. Take Care

Okay this was funny and sweet all at the same time! Loved it!!!
Charisma*