by Arcane Blondie Jul 13, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Pitch-black night sky, |
Wow.. I understood this but god I didn't.. By the end I was ready to lift pages and start looking for the rest of it, you know what I mean? GOD I loved this.. You're going on my favorites list. Great job. |
Extremely vibrant and extrodinary images. The word 'wonderful' should cover it. |
by Darien
Wow, you have managed to grasp an ability not many people are good at. Description and images. You use the right words to create such a clear image. Your dark poetry is amazing, and you have a gift to bring out such morbid and graphic images yet you have a humble heart. Talent is what you have. |
by Jackie Marie
Definatly keep it posted. It is really good. It was slightly confusing to me at first but I reread it and I understand it now. It was kind of scary but more sad than it was scary. It is a very dark poem but I like it. |
I like it, it was interseting!! I have never read a poem like it!!! The descriptions were great!!!! I was confused by the end but other then that 5/5!! Great Job!! |