This is actually pretty interesting. It seems rather deep, dark, and brooding. I like it ^^ 5/5

Very interesting. I loved your descriptions, so delicate and eerie! The ending somewhat confused me because if she is the devil, how can the devil be her master and how can they have the same name? Very good ideas, I liked how you didnt make it rhyme. Keep it up!

I like it, it was interseting!! I have never read a poem like it!!! The descriptions were great!!!! I was confused by the end but other then that 5/5!! Great Job!!

Definatly keep it posted. It is really good. It was slightly confusing to me at first but I reread it and I understand it now. It was kind of scary but more sad than it was scary. It is a very dark poem but I like it.

5/5

>black&&blue

Wow, you have managed to grasp an ability not many people are good at. Description and images. You use the right words to create such a clear image. Your dark poetry is amazing, and you have a gift to bring out such morbid and graphic images yet you have a humble heart. Talent is what you have.

Extremely vibrant and extrodinary images. The word 'wonderful' should cover it.

Wow.. I understood this but god I didn't.. By the end I was ready to lift pages and start looking for the rest of it, you know what I mean? GOD I loved this.. You're going on my favorites list. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 10.5 (If only it were possible!)