Comments : One Day

  • 18 years ago

    by manic moments

    Wow! That was beautiful! It is an addiction. I watch my friend go through this, she can't stop herself from it. I feel and see exactly what your trying to say. Very good prespective.

    Luv Niquee
    XOXOXOXO

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is great. I felt myself get involved emotionaly with the fight this person is going through. It's very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a very good well written peice. the content is very well presented and the story well told. it is a difficult addiction to overcome, well than again all addictions are difficult to overcome or they would not be addictions...

  • 18 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    This captures exactly what it is like to live with self harm. superbly written.

  • Great poem!! sad and so full of emoton you captured the feeling and everything of self harm!!! I liked how this one didnt rhyme!!! 5/5!!! Keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    Omg. im loving your writing even more with every poem of yours i read. this one is amazing! and very true!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I like how it's a poem about attempting to fight the urge rather than a more suicidal attempt at telling the story like most cutting poems are. I really like how it's written. Great job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Sad very sad but very good too. it makes me sad cuz i kno wut u r goin thru. i am goin thru it too so if u ever wana talk i am here for u. great poem veyr sad but very good. keep writing i love ur poems. they r all jus so amazing keep it up
    take care
    luve angie

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    -Starts crying- This sounds so much like me it's not even funny.. I used to do that kind of things and I'm so ashamed that it hurts so much when I read poems like this and brings back all the memories but this one just was filled with so much emotion and so much hatred I almost cried... God..

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5