Another inspiring poem. I loved reading it, its true, people shouldn't throw their life away just to do what others expect them to...I've learned this the hard way. Great poem...beauitful.

Ok Honestly I really love this poem! It is well written, Grammar is correct, it has good flow, good word choice, a great message, feeling, and emotion! I love the end so much, showing that if u fulfill ur heart life will always be good, its just beautiful! And I am very impressed! Showing how you must sometimes take a stand and stick with it! Very well done!=D Awesome Job lol=D total 5/5 because it is so well deserved!

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Hmm, the rhymes and flow of this poem were alright. I mean there are times where it seemed forced or unstable, but for the most, it was good. I liked the message in this poem. Make the best of your own life, because you are in control. Well, in my opinion that's what I thought it said to me. Anyways, a really good poem, different. Nice work.

Oooh yes, very well written. i totally dig it. very neat : )

I liked this it wasnt my favorite of your poems but it was good...