by David Marshall Jul 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I crossed my heart, |
by Whisper
That's wonderful. I'm even crying. It's amazing. Keep it up. Don't ever give up your poetry. It's phenomenal. |
Nice Poem, i usually dont like poems that dont rhyme but this one was an exception!!! Very good!!! I liked how the stanzas were only 2 lines instead of 4!!! Well done!! I loved the message!!5/5!! |
It was a great poem..oh for crying out loud i'm crying.It made me relize that i gave my heart to a guy that didn't want it and yet he still has it and he treated me like shit and for some damn reason i still like him and miss him. Great poem keep it up. |