by Lonley prince Jul 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
As you lay in my bed |
by SweetxMisery
Aww you wrote this really well. |
This is a different turn. Usually it's told in the girl's perspective. Nice to see another view on this type of idea. There's some problems with it like the words chosen. They're not exactly as strong for this. At times it didn't flow as smoothly. The potential's there. |