Silently Make Me Cry

by jello   Jul 13, 2006


Without even realizing the tears started to pore
The thought of you silently made me cry
I tried to hide my face in the darkness of the room
I closed my eyes and all I could see was you
How I long for you to be here with me
I've come back to where we first met
(You know what I'm talking about)
The only thing that remains of you here is the memory
And that makes me sad
So very long ago you were here
So very long ago I didn't even know you
Now that I'm here you're all I can think about
And it silently makes me cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by catherine

    I enjoyed this. It really pened up and explained everything. I liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I really liked this...it was sad but it was still sweet and a good write. Very well writtten, thank you so much for the comment, I really apppreciate it.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    A refreshing read, I like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Anothe amazing work, you are so great, another 5/5 from me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Hey --
    Great job on this. I think the flow and such worked out well ;; it was cute.
    Much thanks for your comment on my poem, as my friend truly does mean the world to me. =D

    Samantha Hollywood