This poem what fantasitc. Your words were very discriptive on how you feel and your perspective on thigs. Wonderful write 5/5

Everytime i read ur poems i fall in love. u get better everytime u write a piece. oh dom u too haev so much pain that shouldn't be. i wish i was there for u.
love u
Willow xxoo

Wow----really deep and you did a great job showing the pain in the poem---Amazing flow! 5/5 Keep it up!