This poem was deep and good. keep it up.
babydavie

Sad, but good. Keep up the good work =) Tammie

This was a really good poem put fair* though :) 5/5 thanks for the comment on mine!

GOOD JOB! even tho ur not like that, u really caught the emotion inside of somebody who does (me). lol! keep up the great work!

I just got ur comment. i understand where ur coming from! lol! btw, my name is spelled Hayley, lol!