Miss Murder

by Wings Of Flames   Jul 13, 2006


Tight red dress,
Clutching her skin,
Black belted boots,
To pay for your sin,

Pistol strapped to her thigh,
With a warm embrace,
Brown hair flowing,
And a fallen angel's face,

Dark mascara upon her eyes,
Deepening her hazel rose,
Lips covered with blood,
But her mind is yet to close,

Fingernails painted black,
To match the tainted style,
Encased now in darkness,
To kill. But not to smile.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    The last line had huge impact, and the imagery was fantastic.
    Great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    WOW!! this was amazing!!! i love it. i had to read this because i love afi. and the title reminded me of them eventhough its not one of their best songs. this poem fcuking rocks!! great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Antithesis

    Great imagery adn description used..but the title kind of turns the readers off..

  • 18 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    LOVED IT ..!!!!

    The title just gripped me, and i had to read it lol =D

    The poems is so deep, and a fantastic use of words ... ace ..!!
    5/5

    [..x..Dead.Roses..Jelz]

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I wasn't going to read this one at first because Miss Murder is a song by AFI. However, I am very glad I clicked on this, it was well worth it. I got the complete image in my mind, you are so friggin talented! I love your work. Keep it up. 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.