The last line. to kill but not to smile. that was my favourite bit. the image of teh girl was soemthing like the chick off teh first resident evil. yeha, definately. as soon as i reda it i thought "RESIDENT EVIL!!" lol. sweet little poem. i love the title. catchy : )

Thankyouthankyou !x

As usually it was a good piece. i liked the theme and style. very short stanzas and only for of them. i don't think i need to comment on the flow...its pretty obvious what i'm going to say. good work

Brad

P.S. sorry i haven't written a comment in a while, i've been away.

Love it, sounds like one of my dreams...*cough* Keep it up

WOw! This was awesome!! I loved it. You used pretty good imagry. I could picture what she'd look like and everything. This poem was amazing hun! Keep up the great work! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I love the description! That poem rocked my sox... as all of yours do! 5/5

Ravyn

Im speechless-wow. That is one of the best poems in the ''dark'' category I've read.The descriptions are amazing, the flow is flawless, AND I love the last line!! Be very proud of this poem---No doubt 5/5

I like this poem... Its good... I would reccomend it to people

Very well done, beautifully described that :)
keep it up :)

Great work! I like how you didn't use the title of your poem in the actual content. It had a unique aspect, not like ordinary descriptions of a fallen or evil person. A good job, keep experimenting and writing!

Great work. I love the imagery you have in your poems. The dark style you write with is interesting and keeps me wanting more.

Wow awsome poem.......did u get this tittle from Afi....owell a 5/5 for me!!

I wasn't going to read this one at first because Miss Murder is a song by AFI. However, I am very glad I clicked on this, it was well worth it. I got the complete image in my mind, you are so friggin talented! I love your work. Keep it up. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

LOVED IT ..!!!!

The title just gripped me, and i had to read it lol =D

The poems is so deep, and a fantastic use of words ... ace ..!!
5/5

[..x..Dead.Roses..Jelz]

Great imagery adn description used..but the title kind of turns the readers off..

WOW!! this was amazing!!! i love it. i had to read this because i love afi. and the title reminded me of them eventhough its not one of their best songs. this poem fcuking rocks!! great job

I loved this!
The last line had huge impact, and the imagery was fantastic.
Great work.