Very nice job on this one. You sound like you know a lot of what you're talking about for this type of poem. I love the passion you put into writing it. Good job!

xoxo sammycakes

Aw, now this is what I'm talking about... Poem with emotion and a background to it.. It even flowed alright.. Not your best flowing, but nice anyways.

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