Hollow Rain

by Misstress   Jul 13, 2006


I hear its whisper in a distance
I feel the graceful dance of the air
Sending its own welcome message.
The sound grows nearer
As I hear footsteps becoming one
With the echoes it had made
I stood still
Ive watched and listened
There was peace in me.
My senses are awaken with the first
Raindrop touching my cheek,
I pumped my head unto the sky
Hoping to catch the beauty painted on it
It was not there
It was not there at all
For I was crying
For I was alone

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lutu

    Beautiful poem. Love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah.. thats very very good. I wasn't expecting the ending, which made it even better. I like this alot. I want to say thank you for all of your comments. They mean so much to me. I will keep up with your poems, your talented. Keep it up. =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    5/5 coz this poet deeply touch my heart and i can feel the emotion even the flow was so good and very enjoyable.. pagpatuloy mo lang bro...
    god bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Very nice poem :)
    good flow
    good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Ive watched and listen

    [ I think you should have "listened" instead of listen. ]

    Sad poem but nicely done. Had some good imagery in it aswell. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

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