Nice poem!

I can feel the sadness most espcially in the last line...kee up the good work

5/5 great poem and nice flow...kept me reading and i hope more of your poems are like this

Ive watched and listen

[ I think you should have "listened" instead of listen. ]

Sad poem but nicely done. Had some good imagery in it aswell. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Very nice poem :)
good flow
good job

5/5 coz this poet deeply touch my heart and i can feel the emotion even the flow was so good and very enjoyable.. pagpatuloy mo lang bro...
god bless!

Woah.. thats very very good. I wasn't expecting the ending, which made it even better. I like this alot. I want to say thank you for all of your comments. They mean so much to me. I will keep up with your poems, your talented. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Beautiful poem. Love it.