Comments : Broken Beauty

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    That was awesome! I dont think people understand just how much insecurities can eat away at your being but it does.. & you've said that well.
    nice work.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lion

    "I know that I'm ugly,
    my face is what I hide,
    people always judge me,
    I wish they could see whats inside,"

    I think so many people can relate to those lines and that really raises the message to the reader with alot of direction and clarity. Good stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by Starlena

    That's how i feel sometimes too. The poem got to me and made me remember those days when i was down and blue. Just like every one else we all have those days and you just fill like you don't Know what to do , Like your not human. But we all have good and bad days, even if you don't have good days you'll have something close to it. If you need anyone to talk to you can e-mail me at nasty_nooch@yahoo.com plz write cuz i know how you feel.

  • 18 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Wow... all of your poems are great! And yeah.. thanks for the comments. They were the first comments I got. anyways, you really are a great poet.

  • 18 years ago

    by Charlyn

    Wow.. this is such a great poem.. i can really relate to the first few lines and i know that a lot of other people can too.. :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    Wow, this was another great poem. The meaning are so true, ~Can totally relate~ and I like how honest they seem...
    You are a really good poet and I love your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Wicked poem its relli gud! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Briana

    Thats a good poem. but do you even have a hint of good in your life?

  • 18 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    Freaking awesome poem... great job with it... u have a lot of emotion and i hope to se more of ur work. totally a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Heer

    AAAWWWW.. your poems are pretty intresting"!!!