Not A Care

by david Jul 13, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / other

Everyone is lying
despising hate
Not a care at all
for anyone else
except themselves
hoping to stay
but knowing your already gone.

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18 years ago
by skittles

This poem is like wow to me coz I love someone soooooooo much and I want to be with them but noone cares because they only think of themselves. Its good.

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18 years ago
by Tammie

I agree with Bridgette. Its so short but something about it is really great. Great job. Keep it up.
Tammie
18 years ago
by Bridgette

I really like this. It's really short, but there's just something about it that I really like. I loved the last two lines. Great job on this 5/5