I really like this. It's really short, but there's just something about it that I really like. I loved the last two lines. Great job on this 5/5

I agree with Bridgette. Its so short but something about it is really great. Great job. Keep it up.
Tammie

This poem is like wow to me coz I love someone soooooooo much and I want to be with them but noone cares because they only think of themselves. Its good.

love