by 1oftheworst Jul 13, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
You say were best friends, |
Your ending was the best. But there's a problem with the repetition of 'so' cuz it just...I don't know...it didn't really maintain the smoothness it could've had. Beginning a little shaky, smoothed out in the middle and delivered a strong ending. |
by rebecah
I really liked this poem. i can relate. great job. keep it up. |