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  • 18 years ago

    by rebecah

    I really liked this poem. i can relate. great job. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Your ending was the best. But there's a problem with the repetition of 'so' cuz it just...I don't know...it didn't really maintain the smoothness it could've had. Beginning a little shaky, smoothed out in the middle and delivered a strong ending.
    ~Faith-less