I like this poem.

It sounds more like lyrics to a song.! But I loved it sooooo much!!!!!!! Keep writing 5/5 but I would serious think about that lyrics thing like if you could find someone who did that stuff!

I liked this, but it's not my favorite of yours. I'm not sure what else to say, it just didn't stick out like the rest do.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5