So Sweet

by Nathaniel   Jul 13, 2006


To see a smile
On your face,
Will always make
My heart race.

To smell your hair,
Or feel your touch.
Are all the things
I love so much.

That is why
I hold you near,
And whisper things
Into your ear.

I do this,
Not to be discreet,
But to hold you close
Because you are so sweet.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Oscar

    Wow, great poem. short, sweet, to the point, yet really gets the message through.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    I really like your style. Love love poems that are short and sweet. 5/5 Loretta

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww.. this was adorable! i cant keep the smile off my face.. the way you worded it was so simple but the underlying meaning so complicated.. wonderful work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Aww such a sweet poem 5/5 xx have just sat here and read all of your poems and although this is the only one I commented on, i think your work is great and look forward to reading more in the future ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Nathaniel --
    Aww, how cute! You did a great job on this, not much to say. The rhyming was perfect, and this was definitely a great poem from you. Keep this up, you`ve got talent. Don`t ever forget that. 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

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