Last stanza, first line, last word, it should be 'things'

But I absolutely loved it! It was so precise and exact, and the flow went smoothly. I loved each line and its meaning, to the whole stanza, to the whole poem. It was really good. The message and meaning you sent to the reader was perfect... the feeling was defintely there. Great Job! It was great.

Alright now, my turn to comment you

Raych..whoever is telling you these LIES should feel really ashamed...hun if you want to cry or show weakeness then do so...If you don't want to help a friend one day because your going through hell to...if they are a friend they'll understand...You can't not be you, because then it just makes your life harder and you'll always walk around confused not knowing what you want to be in life or where you want to go...I did love this poem though! I like how you write!!