This is one of my favourites on the site! it is so true and really makes you think about stuff. well done!

Hmm...thought provoking. Some tiny errors with the flow but it smoothed out to a really nice ending. Some really strong lines and stanzas. Thought that this was really interesting. I love the leaping idea.
~Faith-less

This was well said it really made me think which is nice. Its hard to get around everything you have in life when you dont truly know yourself.

-Kayla

Very well done and congtrats on the poem contest ur sucha good poet keep it up

Very well done cant wait til u put more poems up!!

Some intereseting ideas presented in this that really make you think.
The imagery was strong and it flowed well.
The ending was different but in a good way.
Great write.

Yet another great poem.

Good job.

Nathaniel --
This poem had a kind of vague intent ;; but after reading it a couple times, I was able to tell exactly what you meant. I think the last stanza is definitely a strongest ;; and a really good way to end such a poem. You did a pretty good job, but I`m going to have to dock you a bit for unclarity. 4/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Very nice , I really enjoyed this. I am living in the same boat I think
5/5 Great job Loretta

Wow this is a nice poem. it really got me thinking.
5/5 good job

Awwww! i really like it! the rhyme scheme is flawless, the meaning is so cute and just brilliant. another masterpiece.
Ginnie x