It was good, i kind of didn't understand it tho..maybe that is just me! it was kind of fuzzy in the sense that the point didn't come out to clear..but other then that i liked it, it was an interesting topic! great job

Great imagery in this poem! Thats so cute you write about lady bugs..I always see dead ones and flies in my window and I never thought about writing about them! What a creative mind you have! wonderful write!
Krissey

Short sweet poem--I love it! Great imagery and flow--5/5 That is really creative [like Krissey said] to write about lady bugs---

High definition imagery! I love how you described everything so perfectly. Your words painted the perfect scene.
I love this line:

"A field of red and black poppies
untouchable behind the glass."

Even though the lady bugs died, you wrote about them with such perfection.
Take care and keep it up~Holly